1.Something I see that the critique says and that i can fix is the word usage and how to stay on topic with my story also add more detail to my stories.
2.From what the critique says i think we still need to balance out our quotes by using more sources.
3.The attribute after the first sentence, i don't hunk we should do that we've been doing great without it.
4. We have already covered writing thesis statements also with the 3-5 paragraphs to back it up and prove it we have already done that. We also have varied topics about campus and off campus rings that are going on. A lot of the stories his year have had very vivid details and have changed the wording to make a difference and make it sound like its a news paper article.
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